Glad it's finally out, good job! I look forward to future JackBz good jobs.
This flash seems like a good flash from the review below but I think this should of included my skit for the collab:
"Hey I just played on the computer!"
"What's a computer?"
"It's a err..."
*5 minute long silence*
" I have aids."
AKA I expected something so much better from you top newground people.
YOU HAVE WON!
Needs Loading Bar
The game seems like a good game from the review below, but this needs a loading bar for such a huge file size. Why may you ask ? Well this would let the user know that the game is loading otherwise it may be mistaken as broken.
Not bad, but could be better...
First thing I would like to point out is that if your trying to teach someone something, dont have music in the background that distracts the user. Basic UI and interface rules. But apart from that and some unneeded language, your HTML help file is ok.
Hope this helps in future projects.
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